Impressive film!
Well first of all, i think it's safe to say your going to own everyone in the contest.
The movie itself i enjoyed, but it was very drawn out for what it was - there was some overly long pauses that weren't needed and made the whole story seem too long and drawn out. The fighting sequence and the quick movements were spot on as ever, but they werent very frequent, so the animation itself relied on the more dramatic stillness of the scene a lot. Also the lipsynch itself bothered me a bit, mainly because i couldn't see it too well in the flash - but i'm sure it looks better on the proper version. Then finally, my main gripe, is the way Lucy's head seems to be copy and pasted in a few too many shots, just that same sideways angle in the close ups and far away shots. It would of been nice to see some different angles or a few redraws of that same angle to give it more variety.